Space exploration is too much expensive and the money should be spent on more important things

People think that money should be spent on more important things than exploring space for huge sums because people are afraid to take risks and think it is a waste of money.My opinion is to take risks and explore our space. The earth is over four billion years
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scientists must explore other planets for life.The first telescopic observations of Mars were made by Galileo Galilei in 1610.The first map of Mars was published in 1840 and more precise mapping began in 1877.NASA Curiosity rover landed in Gale Crater on August 6,
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and has been exploring the area ever since. It was recently joined on Mars by Perseverance, which landed on February 18, 2021. Both missions are aimed, among other things to search for the remains of ancient life on Mars.Though at present
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planet is cold and barren.Elon Masko expedition
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proved that there will be life on another planet.Elon Musk promised everyone in 2016 that he would send people to Mars in 2025-2026. I think we should invest in investigating
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