In the 21st century, the average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some solutions that could be taken to reduce the effect of aging populations.

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, we are facing a range of new challenges

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both individuals and society as we live longer than ever before.

Although

we have to deal with

this

problem in more efficient ways, we have the opportunity to make a far more smooth transition into the future. A significant majority of

this

problem with a longer average life span is the health of aged

people

and the shortfall in tax revenues.

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people

are hard to avoid suffering from various

disease

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.

Also

, most

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countries

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do not have sufficient medical facilities

such

as

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and medical personnel to meet the demand for patients.

In addition

, it is hard to maintain securing tax revenue for governments

due to

the decreasing number of economically active

people

.

For instance

, in South Korea, the bulk of employees are forced to retire at the age of 60 or earlier.

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might lead

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huge burden to the country when imposing less tax get bigger than spending more welfare budget.

However

, it is fully possible to fix these problems if we have

desire

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to take

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responsibility. First of all, Encouraging

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elderly

people

to do more exercise and eat

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diet is the most radical method followed by improving the medical sector.

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is because

preventing

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is always better than

cure

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. Correspondingly, to prevent the shortage of national taxes, we need to re-assess

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pension and retirement

systems

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for an

aging

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society. By recognizing

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and dignity of senior citizens and enacting the retirement age extension policy, they could be economically active for longer.

This

would help reduce the potential

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poverty

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seniors

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also

boost the nation as a whole. In conclusion, it is obvious that there are many different troubles associated with a longer average life expectancy, and we need to

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take steps as a nation

as well as

elderly

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themselves to clear up

this

phenomenon.