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Some people think that private schools have many advantages while others think there have many drawbacks for the community. Discuss both sides and give an opinion

#people #schools #community
Private
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institution
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 have been cropping up nowadays as a great option to pursue higher education.
While
 some people encourage admission to choose private
schools
 as it offers several positive outputs, others think
otherwise
.
This
 essay will discuss both sides and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those who support attending private
schools
 believe the variety
benefits
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 are given to their
students
. As private
schools
 are required
enlistment
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 to pay tuition fee per semester, it turns out to make
they
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them
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 get more well-developed
facilities
 as opposed to
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public institution, which is based on government taxes. In terms of human resources, it can be seen that the majority of private
schools
 are hiring a professional teachers with a great background in their field, meaning that
students
 are more convenient to study in small-sized of groups and choose their own interests.
While
 regarding the
facilities
, it
also
providesalso
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provides also
provide
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 several fancy
facilities
,
such
 as a swimming pool, student dormitory, canteen and so on, making
students
 can distribute their hobby outside the class schedule set.
On the other hand
, opponents of
this
 point out that there are several drawbacks to choosing
a private
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a private school
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schools
, where the social gap is getting higher. In fact, all
facilities
 provided by private
schools
 are costly, which can not always tolerate by middle-income households.
Students
 who live in
an unstable families
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an unstable family
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 will not fit in the community, most of the
students
 are coming from
a rich families
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a rich family
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, where they are using high-end brands for school. What if they can not adapt to
this
 kind of environment
and
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which
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 affect their academic performance?
Overall
, it seems advisable that the decision to choose whether to attend private or public school should meet with the financial capacity of each family, rather than the mere prestige that all children should undergo
to
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 private
schools
. It would appear that
this
 would make
students
 more convenient and pleasant to study in a match study environment.
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