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Online shopping is significantly increasing what effect does this have people, what are the demerits and what are the job opportunities?

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In the contemporary world,
growing
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 trend of online shopping is ubiquitous. In the subsequent
paragraphs
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 I will elucidate the benefits, drawbacks, and
the
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jobs that online shopping is creating.  
To begin
 with, online shopping saves a lot of time. Earlier we had to go to the market and bring different
things
 from different shops. But now with the advent of online
shopping
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 we can see a wide range of products
in
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on
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 a single screen be it mobile or laptop and buy the
things
 of our choice in just
few
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a few
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 clicks and get the
things
 delivered
at
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to
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 home.
Apart from
this
,
due to
 increasing
competition
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 the shopping sites often give a good discount.
Therefore
, buying those
things
 online turns out to be pocket friendly.    
On the other hand
, it has multiple drawbacks.
Firstly
, people are becoming more and more lethargic as they are getting everything
at
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in
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 the comfort of their
home
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homes
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 and don’t walk at all for shopping which used to be
a
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good exercise for our
body
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bodies
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. Apart from that, many retailers and workers in retail shops have lost jobs
due to
 the booming online shopping industry.  
Nevertheless
, it has created many alternate jobs as well. In
IT
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the IT
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 industry, software professionals design and maintain online shopping sites.
Furthermore
, there are customer executives and delivery persons who are solely dependent on
this
 online shopping industry.   In conclusion, I would like to mention that though there are
few
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a few
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 downsides but a good number of job generation and the customer facility that online shopping
providing
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provides
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 us are turning out to be highly beneficial for
the
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humankind.
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