The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
The presented bar graph provides information about the proportion of
faculty
members who worked in a university based on gender in 2012. Generally speaking, as provided from the chart, it is clearly shown that from seven faculties, male workers dominated the
faculty
of engineering, law, sciences, and business, with the biggest margin found in the engineering
faculty
.
While
their counterpart spread in education, arts, and medicine. In terms of
staff
who are male, there was about 64
percent
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of academic
staff
in the
faculty
of business came from
this
gender. compared to only 32
percent
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of females who worked in
this
faculty
. The chart shows that in the year 2012, three out of five
staff
working in law were males.
while
at the same time, females only accounted for around 20 %. In science, it seems that during the period given, the male
staff
was dominated (about 62
percent
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) by around 30%. During
this
time, a huge difference was shown in engineering, as the number of male
staff
made up around 82% compared to below 20% of females.
On the other hand
, it can be seen that the percentage of women working in education, and arts were around 60%, and 80% respectively.
While
in medicine both genders shared an equal proportion.
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