Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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people try to push their boundaries and explore new things in
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finding new opportunities.
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some prefer to spend most of their time at their born place or
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hand, the main reason for someone to stay in their original place is their family.
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to a young couple who lives with their mother and father. Do I ever need to mention how beneficial
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failure and
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their comfort zones could be considered as other main reasons for living close to someone’s born place.
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that will help to have a good family bond and greater mental satisfaction.
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safety and security
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pretty much ensured when living
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neighbours.
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this
lifestyle will have some major bad impact on someone’s
life
. People may miss many good opportunities they get if they were in another city or country. One of my friends recently moved to Canada for his new job. I see how he is enjoying his new
life
there. He is getting the chance to experience a new culture, explore new places and most importantly, meet new people. In my opinion, It is good to live with your own family as it gives you
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good mental freedom. But someone should not miss the opportunity to get exposed to the changing world because of that. The best approach would be to try other ways to keep connected with your loved ones
while
following your dreams.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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