Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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largely contributed to the traffic issues and pollution problems. It

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deterioration

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the air quality as they make poison

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gas

. One of the

sollutions

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solutions

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issues

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is rising the price of energy so that

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will use their

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more wisely.

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, I extremely not agree with

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solution since it does not give a paramount impact,

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otherwise

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it will have many drawbacks to economic conditions. In my opinion, upgrading the number of public

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will

perfectly

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accepted by

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society. The majority of

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believed that if the government establish

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, the

economic

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will began to deteriorate.

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resources place

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crucial role in

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situation in every

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.

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, in Indonesia when the

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price increased, the

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prices

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increased. Many

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were

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suffered at that time as the government had not

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anything to overcome those situations.

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case reflected that rising

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energy prices not only

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vehicle users but

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the

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in

those country

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.

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,

these regulation

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did not

illustrates

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any paramount improvement. The users who owned

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definitely can afford the

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gas

without any struggles. The wealth of the vehicle owners and non-vehicle owners is distinctive,

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consequently

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the chances of obtaining potential issues will deteriorate.

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wealthy persons will not have any hesitation adding more credits as long as they can ride their

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,

meanwhile

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the

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driver will

gained

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more credits lost. Afterwards, the air quality not getting any better

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many

people

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try

more

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harder to survive. In conclusion, it is not a wise solution in terms of reducing

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pollution. There are more drawbacks than

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beneficial impacts of

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policy.

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, I suggest that the government can

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people

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to use public

transportations

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and increase their quality.