You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: -Explain your varied achievements over the past two years -Express your interest in growing with the company -Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

Dear Madam, I've been working as a designer for the past two years. I was successfully able to handle the front-end customers
as well as
the design interns
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my team. I received the 'most outstanding designer' award for
last
year's innovation project. Not only that but
also
I've played a major role in communicating design ideas to team members, who creates the garments.
Therefore
, I believe
this
is the best time to express my interest in a promotion. I would like to request a one-on-one meeting at your convenient time. Highly appreciate,
if
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you could arrange
this
before the appraisal process
start
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.
Hence
I can personally meet you to have a conversation regarding the promotion.
Finally
,
this
promotion will help me to gain more knowledge. ,
Furthermore
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it will lead me to grow with the organization. Best regards, Pavithra Perera.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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