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Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take a part-time course. Mention - qualifications and work experience - details about the course - how this course will help you

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22.01.2023 Dear Sir, I'm writing
this
 letter to express my interest to register for a short-time course in pattern making. I've obtained a bachelor's degree in fashion design and product development,
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 I have 2 years of working experience in a well-reputed company in the apparel industry.
This
 short course will teach all the key areas of the pattern-making subject.
For instance
, pattern grading, manipulation, pivoting and draping methods will be covered during the period. Learning pattern-making will be extremely beneficial for a fashion designer,
hence
 we can create the designs and technical details in a practical manner as we have learned the basics.
In
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this
 will lead the designer to be more innovative and productive. After considering all the mentioned facts, I would prefer to take part in
this
 short diploma to gain more knowledge in the field. Hope you will go through the above and grant me the opportunity. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you Faithfully, Sujatha Pathirana.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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