Earlier working from home was discouraged. Nowadays, many organizations are encouraging telecommuting. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Support your opinion with examples.

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workers

to

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from home

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in the past was not permitted.

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impact

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both

employeer

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employers

employer

and employees, I believed working remotely from houses have superiorities over the demerits

such

as less stress and saving more money for overhead

cost

, overtaking the drawbacks. In negative views, from

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employer

employee

perception, they perceived working from home is not beneficial for

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productivity.

This

happens because organizations could not control their

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working hours how many

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they

starting

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to

work

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another

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household

activity

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while

in

meeting

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or doing

work

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, but

this problems

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could be done if

enterpraises

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enterprises

have

strick

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rules and regulations to ensure their employees

work

well even they do not have to go to

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the office

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perspective, they could not focus when they

in

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their home,

is

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caused by many

distraction

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distractions

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such

as doing chores, noises or unstable internet connection.

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is because, their houses

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are not

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properly built for working

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easily

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to distract

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, making them demotivated. Perhaps, in order to help them

work

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proper

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the proper

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condition

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, they could

saving

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save

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their transportation

cost

to buy proper equipment for

works

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. In positive views, working remotely could help

their

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worker

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to

saving

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more energy for daily commuting which

making

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them lessen their stress, and could

using

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their spare

time

to improve their skills or engage with their family.

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is to say,

workers

who must

commuting

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daily might spending their

time

more than 2 hours if that

time

is

spend

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to improve their

capabilites

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capabilities

for

working

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purposes, would

brings

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benefits for their future careers.

Moreover

,

this

could

benefits

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for

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apply

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employeer

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employer

employees

to reduce overhead

cost

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costs

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,

saving

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and saving

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their

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them

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money to expand their business. When companies

does

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not need to spend their

expanditure

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expenditure

expenditures

for

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office facilities and rent,

this

could save

enormous

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an enormous

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budget for

open

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new business from those, and their market could be expanded, so make them become

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a market

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leader. eventually,

this

benefits

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is

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a win-win

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solution for both sides.

To conclude

, I totally agree to encourage telecommuting

work

,

this

would

overtaking

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the drawbacks in order to tackle

mental

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health

problem

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on

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workers

and

expanding

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the company

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company

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new business

from

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by

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saving their

cost

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costs

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. where is possible to combine

this

approach with hybrid working

condition

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, so

their

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both side would have

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a win-win

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solution

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to solve the demerits.