Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.-How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It is common to see workers

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as teachers, nurses, and doctors receive a minimum

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they carry out a very important

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, with many responsibilities.

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, is common as well to see actors or football players earn a very high

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fundamental for the development of society. In

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essay, I will express my agreement with

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statement and will look for some methods, on the

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of which, I will take a decision on how people should be paid.

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with, I totally agree with the affirmation that some workers are paid more than others. ,

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doesn’t depend on the responsibility that a worker has in their

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, but I think that rather it depends on how much money they can bring to a society with their visibility and audience.

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is the reason why actors and players are paid more, compared to a teacher or a doctor.

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, comparing the

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of a teacher with the

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of Shakira, it is easy to see the inequality. A teacher has a lot of responsibilities, as they have to teach future workers,

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, Shakira has a good voice and a lot of visibility, but not the responsibility to educate another person.

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, she brings for sure more money to a country, when she takes a concert, so she earns more. I can find another example of

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issue in working as a carpenter. They have a lot of things to take care of, starting from the safety of other people, but for sure they earn less than an actor. Keeping

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example in mind, I would like to express some conditions on the

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of which we should choose how much pay a worker. To my mind, an employee should be paid on the

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of the responsibilities that they have and on the

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of their and others' safety, which they need to constantly think about during the time of work.

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, a bricklayer can even risk their

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during work time. In conclusion, I believe that salaries should be revised and should be paid more who has more risks or more task than those who have more fun than thought in their

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