Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.-How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It is common to see workers
such
as teachers, nurses, and doctors receive a minimum
salary
,
although
they carry out a very important
job
, with many responsibilities.
On the other hand
, is common as well to see actors or football players earn a very high
salary
, without carrying out a
job
that is
fundamental for the development of society. In
this
essay, I will express my agreement with
this
statement and will look for some methods, on the
basis
of which, I will take a decision on how people should be paid.
To begin
with, I totally agree with the affirmation that some workers are paid more than others. ,
Furthermore
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this
doesn’t depend on the responsibility that a worker has in their
job
, but I think that rather it depends on how much money they can bring to a society with their visibility and audience.
This
is the reason why actors and players are paid more, compared to a teacher or a doctor.
For instance
, comparing the
salary
of a teacher with the
salary
of Shakira, it is easy to see the inequality. A teacher has a lot of responsibilities, as they have to teach future workers,
instead
, Shakira has a good voice and a lot of visibility, but not the responsibility to educate another person.
Nevertheless
, she brings for sure more money to a country, when she takes a concert, so she earns more. I can find another example of
this
issue in working as a carpenter. They have a lot of things to take care of, starting from the safety of other people, but for sure they earn less than an actor. Keeping
this
example in mind, I would like to express some conditions on the
basis
of which we should choose how much pay a worker. To my mind, an employee should be paid on the
basis
of the responsibilities that they have and on the
basis
of their and others' safety, which they need to constantly think about during the time of work.
For example
, a bricklayer can even risk their
life
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during work time. In conclusion, I believe that salaries should be revised and should be paid more who has more risks or more task than those who have more fun than thought in their
job
.
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