You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

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Dear Sir , I am writing from the Amda

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about the event that you recently managed for us. It was at the Westin Hotel downtown and was held the weekend before

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(the weekend of the 23rd) on the 4th floor in the reception area. There were some issues during the meeting that you could have foreseen in my opinion. First of all, the catering was tardy and there weren't many meals that the guests liked. We are a local

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but the majority of the food was western.

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we tried to reach your

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in order to arrange for an extra hour but could not contact you.

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was extremely unprofessional. From my point of view, you should address these problems immediately by ensuring that you have catered

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the tastes of the

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you are representing. There should

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be a backup number to deal with any issues that come up during the event. I hope that you will be able to make some form of restitution to us for these inconveniences. Please reply promptly. Best Regards, Alma Islam

Alma IslamThu Jan 26 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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