You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
to bring to your consideration a promotion, which I think I am eligible for. Over the past two years, I have been working beyond the expectation of the company and was able to achieve some remarkable performance growth within the team. Not only that but
also
, you might remember that I won the best problem solver prize in the annual awards ceremony.
Further
, I have a clear personal career path ahead and I would continue to enhance my technical and communication knowledge.
Moreover
, I am planning to follow a few courses on an online learning platform to improve my technical skills. Increasing my capabilities and productivity would be extremely beneficial for me
as well as
the growth of the company. Based on the above reasons I believe that I should receive a promotion within the organisation.
Therefore
, I would like to request a meeting with you to discuss
this
opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding
this
. Yours faithfully, John Doe
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