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SOME EXPERTS THAT IT IS BETTER TO LEARN A FOREIGN LANGUAGE AT A PRIMARY SCHOOL THAN AT A SECONDARY SCHOOL. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH ITS DISADVANTAGES?

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Being multilingual is one of the biggest assets of a professional in your career. Learning a new
language
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 is always tough considering the selection of the right medium and timeframe. There are certain pros and cons associated with learning a foreign
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 at a young age.
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 with, the pros of learning a foreign
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 at a young age are fluency and a wider range of vocabulary which a practitioner can achieve.
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 effort is key for flawless results
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 learning a new
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. It must be of utmost priority to have the right accent and choice of words during a conversation. To have a better perspective of all the aspects of cultural references in a foreign
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, one needs to spend more
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 learning and starting earlier in primary school can provide enough
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 for that.
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, in secondary ,school there is less
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 for learning a new
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 and there is a risk that the learner might rush things. ,
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 there will be less speaking experience which will affect the fluency and vocabulary of the speaker. One of the major factors will be the
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 of origin as a natural accent of the user which will be much more developed in secondary as compared to primary will affect the new
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. These factors must be considered when choosing the right
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 for learning a foreign
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 there are drawbacks to learning a foreign
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 at a later stage of your life, I believe the benefits outweigh the downsides.

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