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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your firend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Adam, I hope you are doing great and keeping safe. I went through your previous email. It is
such
 a great idea to learn a new sport. There are plenty of merits in doing games.
For example
, It helps to develop our concentration and multi-tasking skills.
Moreover
, it helps to release our work pressure. I prefer to suggest tennis. Because you were an athlete at the school, you will be able to learn it super fast. There is a tennis club near the school. You can join the club and start learning. They are open all weekdays and Saturdays. But not Sundays. They are charging a small fee for the membership. as you know, I played badminton when I'm schooling. I was
also
 thinking to start something to relax.
Therefore
, I
also
 prefer to join you to learn tennis. Both of us can go to the club together on weekdays, probably after work. Let me know your thoughts. I'm waiting for
the
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positive feedback. hope to see you soon. Best regards, Dulaj.
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