Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sports. Do you agree or disagree?

As teachers and

doctors

invest their efforts to teach and

treat

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,

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government should allocate more budget for them than

entertainment

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for entertainment

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and

sports

. I agree with both options as they

are have

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own

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their own

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advantages. On the one hand,

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money

for

teacher

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teachers

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and

doctors

is good for society because it can be

reason

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the reason

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for improvement. By increasing

salary

of teachers and

doctors

we can increase productivity at

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. Recently from social media

platforms

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I saw that 75% of

doctors

have

second

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job

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for

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feed their

family

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however

rate of the teacher

more

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higher than

doctors

it

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is consist

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about

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96.7%. By the

statistics

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we are able to know they can not work well as there tired by

full time

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job.

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, if they

are

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receive more

salary

their productivity at work

increase

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and it means that society will be smart and healthy

by

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their help.

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, allocating

money

for

sports

and

entertainments

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it

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is good too. By spending more

money

for

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the

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sport we can create

youngsters

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interests

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about

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it and they can make popular our country. From

magazine

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called "Time" we are able to know that during the world cup

2022

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Qatar's budget filled during the 3

month

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due to

increasing the rate of tourism.

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, if we

are

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waste a lot of

salary

for

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sports

for instance

for gifts like

car

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,

house

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and others. Youngsters started

interesting

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about

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in

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sports

because of

money

. Taking everything into consideration, I think that government should

spent

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more

salary

for

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on

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sports

unti

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until

unit

improving

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our tourism and

then

waste

money

for

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on

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teachers and

doctors

.