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You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am an employee in your company working as an Assistant
Production
 manager and I am writing with regard to present myself as a potential candidate for the promotion meeting. I have been working in
this
 post for two years and I have played a major role in enhancing the
production
 of the plant and managing all the workers very well. Being an employee of
this
 esteemed institution, I want to deliver the best of my abilities. I have a few plans about how to become an unbeatable entity in the consumer market. I have done my master's studies in business resources and I very well know how to handle the manpower in
production
 plants and how to motivate employees to deliver the best out of them.
Lastly
, I
also
 want to render my expertise in upgrading the
production
 unit because my pivotal goal is to succeed
along with
 the present management. I would be glad to meet you in person and it may to
prove
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 be an opportunity for us to discuss all the plans in detail. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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