Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear sir,

#computers #computer #course #interests #people #college #enrolment #officer #circumstances #exception #enrol #addresses #sir

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Dear John, I am writing

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letter to request that I would like to admission to your college for a computer class, which I just read about it in the newspaper advertisement. I got to know that the program is only available to students who already took a computer program in their elementary school. But I did not study computers in my schools.

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, I am quite interested to take part in

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course as I never got a chance to study computers at my school because I had something else to focus on at that time.

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, I am requesting you grant me permission to take

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course.

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, I am ready to give the entrance test

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; as I want to gain knowledge about computers. I will be thankful if you let me take that program for my future studies. I am looking forward to hearing from you upon my request. Yours faithfully, Aman.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

155 words

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