Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is indisputable fact that some people argue

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reducing the trouble of habitations and surroundings in order to stop diseases that have been

spreads

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out. Based on

this

statement, I partially agree because of the effect on

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public health. To commence with, it is commonly true that a lot of

ilness

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illness

illnesses

are

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caused by pollution. If the

goverment

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government

emphasizes the law to operate the factory with less contamination and arrange the waste of household, the cause of infections might be reduced.

For instance

, people who suffered

with

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diseases related to

lungs

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,

such

as asthma, bronchitis, and pneumonia will have a gradual decrease owing to less

polution

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pollution

and contaminations, resulting in the growth of quality of life. Another point to consider is

the

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illness that does not have any connection with pollution,

such

as coronary heart disease, hypertension, diabetes, and stroke, that

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with food and lack of exercise. In

this

condition, the government's work for reducing poisonous effects is useless.

Thus

, they must develop

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health services to educate

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society.

As a result

, each individual will improve their knowledge and maintain their health, resulting to prevent several implications. To illustrate

this

, the nutritionist should explain to the crowd about

healthy

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diet, superb menus, and the importance of

exercises

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to boost

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immunity.

To sum up

, I partially agree to make the authority only

decreasing

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environmental issues. Despite

to focus

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focusing

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on lowering the number of pollution and housing issues, the authority

also

should

contributed

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on

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a problem

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problem

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problems

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that

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related to education.