The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph shows how many
servings
of certain food
items are sold on average every day in two different seasons at the Brisk Café. The average number
of sales
of each item
changed with the season.
Certain food
items had much higher sales
than others in the winter. Hot coffee
had the highest number
of sales
, with an average of 75 servings
sold daily. Following
this
, the item
with the second highest number
of sales
was soup, with an average of 50 servings
sold daily. Salad and ice cream had average daily sales
of 25 servings
each, and iced coffee
had the lowest number
of sales
, with close to zero servings
sold daily.
The sales
numbers for each food
item
were different in the summer from what they were in the winter. Iced coffee
sales
rose significantly, to an average of 40 servings
sold daily. The item
that had the second highest number
of sales
was ice cream, with an average of 35 servings
sold daily. Hot coffee
sales
fell to just 30 servings
daily. Soup and salad had the lowest number
of sales
, with 25 servings
sold daily on average.
In general, the average daily sales
of each food
item
changed when the season changed. Certain items were more popular in the winter, but certain others were more popular in the summer.Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on
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