Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.
A healthy person is described as someone who follows
good
diet, Correct article usage
a good
exercise
and avoids stress. Health Fix the agreement mistake
exercises
according to
world
health organisation, is a state of physical health, mental and social Add an article
the world
well being
and not Add a hyphen
well-being
merly
Correct your spelling
merely
absence
of various diseases.
Correct article usage
the absence
Firstly
, physical fitness is having number
of definitions and it can be promoted by encouraging good activities like Change the article
a number
the number
morning
Add an article
a morning
workout
, walking and adequate sleep. Fix the agreement mistake
workouts
Also
, by reducing unhealthy activites
like smoking, drinking and Correct your spelling
activities
last night
parties. In ancient days, people come behind time to Add a hyphen
last-night
time
schedule for their daily routine and eat organic food without any chemicals, fertilizers Add an article
the time
a time
and
pesticides. Nowadays everything Correct word choice
or
what
we consume is totally composed of various inorganic substances. In recent days, agricultural land is Change the word
that
also
getting harmed with
these Change preposition
by
man_made
products.
Correct your spelling
man-made
secondly
, in our country humans go after many solutions to be
fit in every movement. Unnecessary verb
apply
The human
kind plans their own and starts Correct article usage
Human
day
with water. Normally, the working days Add an article
the day
starts
with liquids and they are aware of bad habits which Change the verb form
start
damages
life. Correct subject-verb agreement
damage
For example
, the
mankind who addicts Correct article usage
apply
for
smoking should face Change preposition
to
high risk
problems like heart attacks, cancer etc. They consume Add a hyphen
high-risk
low fat
foods and take Add a hyphen
low-fat
thsubstances
which Correct your spelling
substances
the substances
contains
high amounts of calcium, Correct subject-verb agreement
contain
iron
. Correct word choice
and iron
For instance
, green leafy vegetables are rich in iron and vitamin b12 and ca is very abundent
in milk and eggs.
Correct your spelling
abundant
Human
Add an article
A human
The human
being
should stay physically fit and should encourage Fix the agreement mistake
beings
furture
generations to stay happily without exposing to any danger Correct your spelling
future
in
being well. by Change preposition
of
illusration
, the Correct your spelling
illustration
lifes
who Correct your spelling
lives
takes
more meat or large hour digesting Change the verb form
take
food
Add an article
the food
they
can undergo the stage of Correct pronoun usage
apply
diabeties
and high blood pressure.
Correct your spelling
diabetes
to conclude
, staying happiness
is Replace the word
happy
longest
form of being healthy.Change the article
the longest
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