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Some people say that the educational success of a student is the result of the work of a good teacher. Others say it depends on the character of the student. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It has long been argued that whether
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 good academic performance depends on the teacher or on the learner himself.
Whereas
 certain individuals hold their opinion towards the quality of lectures and teaching methods, others believe that it interiorly depends on the person who is going to be taught. Basically, quality education needs
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 interest of both teacher and
student
. Here, the following paragraphs are going to highlight the two different opinions. To start with, teachers are the backbone of a nation who not only provide classes in an institution on some predefined area but
also
 awaken students' desire for knowledge.
Thus
, a teacher should be a good speaker,
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 and wise.
In addition
, if a class is enjoyable to a
student
, if it is sufficient to inspire
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 explore, it probably drives students to seek
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new things.
Moreover
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 to be attentive which results in notable pertinence.
In contrast
, individual efforts and concentration are as important as a good mentor. Several studies show that the students
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who
 hardly go through the reference are always legging behind them
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 their own notes and
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 a generous amount of time
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reading outside the class.
For instance
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 a
student
 has the quality of hard
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 or searching unusual documents, it
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 puts him ahead
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 others.
Furthermore
, if a
student
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 and the importance of the study, he or she rarely archives high
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To conclude
, where a guide leads a person to the right path, the person has to walk by Himself.
Hence
, for a remarkable academic outcome, perseverance is needed
along with
 good teachers.
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