Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To start with in my opinion, learning another
language
is
that
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knowing
other
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another language
other languages
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language
like
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fluently apart from one's own
language
.
Also
, talking another
language
is
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gives tons of opportunities ,especially
it
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since it
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is very important in modern life
iIn
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In
fact that nowadays some
people
studying
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study
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languages
such
as English ,Chinese , Russian,Spanish,
French
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and French
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to travel or work. As a result ,other
people
want to learn
language's
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language
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Moreover
, a lot of students plan to study abroad
that
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which
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is
major
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a major
the major
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reason for studying
languages
.
This
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types
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type
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of
people
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person
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learning
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learn
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language
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the language
a language
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for their needs.
However
, some
people
have
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a burden
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burden
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burdened
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desire to study
languages
such
as they wish
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to
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gain
their
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the
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self confidence
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self-confidence
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to communicate with foreigners,
learn
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and learn
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about
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some
countries
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country's
countries'
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culture
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cultures
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. What is more, many
people
curious
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are curious
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about
language
when they talking
different
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a different
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language
they may proud of themselves All things considered, being fluent foreign
language
is
that
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an
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amazing skill . I strongly believe, that knowing many
languages
cause having
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a gloriuos
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gloriuos
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glorious
life .
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