Some people say that the educational success of a student is the result of the work of a good teacher. Others say it depends on the character of the student. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is a debatable topic whether tutors should solely be given the credit for their
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's success in academics or the whole credit must be given to the pupil because he worked hard enough to achieve good grades. In my opinion, both parties have an equal share in
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matter and we cannot choose one over the other.
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with, those who are in favour of teachers opine that without a hardworking
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it is unimaginable to succeed in
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. To be precise, a tutor can make a
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explore his or her hidden interests in the
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by making difficult topics easy to understand, which is only possible if the teacher is working hard for it. To illustrate, in Hindu mythology during the Vedic era the tutors were given the whole responsibility to carve a young
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to be a successful warrior or king.
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, it is right to say that without an able
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it is hard to achieve high grades.
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, those who opt for kiddos over teachers assert that if a
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's interests are divided and he is not serious about his
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that would make it impossible for him to achieve his academic goals. In fact, if a child is focused
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only he would be able to study and absorb the topics in depth ,which would help him to score well in the exams.
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a study about 35 per cent of learners score less than average in exams because they are suffering from divided focus in learning.
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, it a fruitful to say that without a correct approach from the children's end,it is very difficult to become meritorious in their
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.
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, often people try to opt for either teachers or students for good grades but in my
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it is not right to undermine one over the other because it is teamwork where both ends contribute equally.
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