Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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individuals believe that the only motive for learning a foreign
language
is in purpose to move to or work in
a
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overseas country,
while
others think that why someone
need
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to learn a foreign
language
. On the one hand, learning
overseas
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language
has many advantages for
people
.
Firstly
, it would give
people
the experience of other cultures and perspectives.
This
means
that is
best
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way to be fluent in a second
language
.
For instance
, if
people
surrounding by masters of
language
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they can easily learn
the
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another
language
without any difficulties.
Secondly
working abroad would provide
people
with the opportunity of getting a well-paid job.
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,
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has
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a
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work in
the
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restaurant
they
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can earn
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high salary because of
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to speak
in
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English
.
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On the other hand
, moving or working is not the only option why
people
learn abroad languages. Some
people
claim that learning a new
language
give
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a myriad of chances to the
people
.
This
is because, individuals have
a
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interest
to
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watching original movies in
foreign
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language
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,
furthermore
, they want to
learning
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language
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. There is no doubt that the popularity of Turkish dramas has been increasing in the
last
few years which
attract
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many fans all around the world who wish to know more about
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Turkish
culture. Thereby,
people
learn the Turkish
language
with the purpose of fulfilling their curiosity about Turkish.
To sum up
, there are
also
some
people
who learn second languages as part of their curiosity. I believe whatever the reasons why
people
use foreign languages, as long as it brings good impacts for their life
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it would be fine.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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