some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in aforeign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn aforeign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, many
people
are willing to learn a foreign
language
. Some
population
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believe that
people
study
a foreign
language
in order to
work
or
similar
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for similar
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reasons and others have
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view. In my opinion, Most
people
learn
new
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language
to reach their aims
such
as
study
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studying
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and
work
even making friends. On the one hand, A group of individuals
justifaiblay
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justifiably
argue that
only
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reason
can
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that can
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lead to learning
new
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a new
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languge
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language
languages
is
prepration
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preparation
for travel or
work
.
In other words
, the employee who
want
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wants
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get
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a promotion should try to rise their
language
levels. In my personal
experinces
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experiences
experience
, when I want to move
Italy
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to Italy
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for
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to
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study
, I started to
study
Italian
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the Italian
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language
.
Thus
, I had a
study
reason to
learning
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new languages.
On the other hand
, some
people
claim that
for
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learning a foreign
language
do
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not
need
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have a purpose like
as
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apply
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work
or
study
. From
an
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medical viewpoint, learning
new
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a new
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language
can
avoide
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avoid
from mental problems
such
as
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Alzheimer's
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disease.
For instance
, learning
new
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a new
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language
like
as
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apply
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learing
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learning
new
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a new
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skil
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skill
skills
can help to protect mental health.
Moreover
, A vast number of
people
who
study
new languages would
broade
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broaden
their
horizens
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horizons
.
Furthermore
,
people
would
to
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learn about new
culture
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cultures
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throughout
study
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the study
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new
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a new
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language
.
However
, I do not find
this
argument convincing as reasons like
study
or
work
can encourage
people
to learn a new
language
.
For example
, when
a
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employee
need
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needs
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to
work
with
foreign
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a foreign
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community which have to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
.
To conclude
, I believe
people
when
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have
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having
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a reason only going to learn
new
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a new
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language
because they do not use
other
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another language
other languages
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language
in their daily life.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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