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comparison between the unemployment rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to 1999.

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 graph illustrates a comparison between the
unemployment
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 rates in the US and Japan from
March
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 1993 to 1999. The vertical axis represents
workforce
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the workforce
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 which is shown as a percentage.
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, the
unemployment
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rate
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 of the Japanese
population
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 continuously rose
while
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 the American
population
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 became less unemployed. Both countries had upward and downward fluctuations during these 07 years and
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, levelled at the same
rate
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 (5%). The highest
unemployment
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rate
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 in the USA was seen at 7% in
March
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 1993 and it gradually declined with minor ups and downs from 1994 to 1998 until it
finally
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 levelled off in
March
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 1999. In comparison to 1993, there is an approximately 30% reduction in the
unemployment
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rate
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 in 1999.
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, the fate of the Japanese
population
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 in securing their jobs has become harder and harder every year. The skyrocketing
rate
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 of
unemployment
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 was the lowest in
March
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 1993 (2.5%) but picked up the pace until 1999. With the passing of every year, the unemployed
population
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 kept rising which was less than 4% in
March
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 2994 , a little less than 5% in 1996 and a little over 5% in 1999).
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