In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, Children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

Different countries have distinct views of the course

range

that are suitable for

students

to take.

While

students

can be more concentrated on

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subjects

, I believe they should have the

chance

to get to know a wider

range

of courses to cope with today’s developing world. In some countries, educational opportunities are only

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provide

provided

towards

specific

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career

path

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.

Such

limited selections will make

students

more focused on the courses they are taking and reduce the

chance

of

dictracting

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distracting

by other unrelated

subjects

.

This

leads to a better understanding

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the course they take and enhance the

efficience

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efficiency

.

For instance

, one secondary school student John

,

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has

been

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dreamed to become a police officer since he was 10. He can achieve his goal

more

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quicker by

take

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the

police related

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courses at school.

However

, if

children

cannot decide what they want to do in the future,

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a general education that contains a variety of

subjects

could be a better choice. Meanwhile, it would be difficult and unfair to let

children

to

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choose what job to do in future before they attend secondary

schools

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. Because they do not have a solid understanding of what their true desires are, and they do not have a very-developed mindset yet.

Thus

,

children

are entitled to have a

chance

to get to know a wide

range

of

subjects

. By exploring these different

subjects

,

children

can find their passions in certain

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, and

passionate

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can help people to achieve higher achievement in the long run

as well as

maintain a happier feeling during their work. In conclusion,

although

narrow

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the narrow

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range

of

subjects

can help secondary

students

to step into

career

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a career

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quickly, I believe that they should have a

chance

to learn a wider

range

of

subjects

.