The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph above illustrates the average carbon dioxide
emissions
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per person which were discharged for 40
years
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between 1967 and 2007 in four different countries: United Kingdom,
Sweden
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, Italy, and Portugal.
This
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was measured in metric tonnes.
Overall
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, the united kingdom had the highest total of CO2 discharge
although
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it decreased over the
years
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while
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Sweden
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had reached the same statistic of
emissions
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as the UK before it
finally
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decreased sharply. Despite the declining
number
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of
emissions
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in the UK and
Sweden
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, throughout the
years
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, Italy and Portugal had shown an increased
number
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of carbon dioxide
emissions
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. The declining amount of CO2 emission in the UK was stable throughout the
years
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with the final amount of 9 tons in 2007 but it was still the highest mass among these other 4 countries.
However
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,
Sweden
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was fluctuating between 1967-1977 before it
finally
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decreased in 2007. 
On the other hand
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, the incline rate of Portugal was high, approximately 4 metric tonnes until it reached the same
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as
Sweden
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.
Likewise
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, there were
also
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an increased
number
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of
emissions
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in
Sweden
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but not as much as in Portugal's rate.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, years, sweden, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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