The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph above illustrates the average carbon dioxide
emissions
per person which were discharged for 40 years
between 1967 and 2007 in four different countries: United Kingdom, Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal. This
was measured in metric tonnes.
Overall
, the united kingdom had the highest total of CO2 discharge although
it decreased over the years
while
Sweden
had reached the same statistic of emissions
as the UK before it finally
decreased sharply. Despite the declining number
of emissions
in the UK and Sweden
, throughout the years
, Italy and Portugal had shown an increased number
of carbon dioxide emissions
.
The declining amount of CO2 emission in the UK was stable throughout the years
with the final amount of 9 tons in 2007 but it was still the highest mass among these other 4 countries. However
, Sweden
was fluctuating between 1967-1977 before it finally
decreased in 2007.
On the other hand
, the incline rate of Portugal was high, approximately 4 metric tonnes until it reached the same number
as Sweden
. Likewise
, there were also
an increased number
of emissions
in Sweden
but not as much as in Portugal's rate.Submitted by syafiramdr on
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