The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph above illustrates the average carbon dioxide
emissions
per person which were discharged for 40
years
between 1967 and 2007 in four different countries: United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal.
This
was measured in metric tonnes.
Overall
, the united kingdom had the highest total of CO2 discharge
although
it decreased over the
years
while
Sweden
had reached the same statistic of
emissions
as the UK before it
finally
decreased sharply. Despite the declining
number
of
emissions
in the UK and
Sweden
, throughout the
years
, Italy and Portugal had shown an increased
number
of carbon dioxide
emissions
. The declining amount of CO2 emission in the UK was stable throughout the
years
with the final amount of 9 tons in 2007 but it was still the highest mass among these other 4 countries.
However
,
Sweden
was fluctuating between 1967-1977 before it
finally
decreased in 2007. 
On the other hand
, the incline rate of Portugal was high, approximately 4 metric tonnes until it reached the same
number
as
Sweden
.
Likewise
, there were
also
an increased
number
of
emissions
in
Sweden
but not as much as in Portugal's rate.
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  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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