You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away. Write at least 150 words.

#work #month #manager #reason #length #week’s #time

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that my wife is expected to deliver

baby

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a baby

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in the next week,

for

this

reason

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,reason

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I am planning to apply for personal leave starting from 1st February till

end

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the end

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of the month. The leave duration is about 20 working days, it would be 30 days including weekends. I need to look after her

untill

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until

my mother comes to my home so I need

this

personal

time-off

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time off

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Last

week you

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apply

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have

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apply

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assigned me a task to complete our website home page which is

due to

complete on 3rd February, I am going to extend my office hours to complete

this

task within time and before I go on leave. I have spoken to Rahul regarding my leave who agreed to look into any issues that may arise in my absence. I have given him access to my code so he does not face any

trobule

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trouble

in my absence. Hope you would approve all my leaves. Yours

Sincearly

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Sincerely

, Phaneendra Sai

Submitted by Phaneendra on Fri Jan 27 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

169 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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