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Band 2

Give details of the job & position you are applying for Explain why the reference is important Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

#job #position #reference #information #teacher
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Dear Mr Ramaswamy, I am Phaneendra Sai, studied Bachelor of Engineering
in
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 JNTUK university
graduated
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and graduated
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 in 2022,
my
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 college ID is 10021A0432. I am writing
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loetter
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letter
 to request a
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recommendation
 letter from you for a job at Google India. The role I applied for is software engineer, I heard about
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 role from Linkedin. Google is hiring fresh graduates from the
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college
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 position
,
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apply
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 since I recently graduated I am
perfect
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a perfect
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 fit for
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 role. When I was
in
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the
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apply
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campus you are one of the professors I
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interacted
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with monstly
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monstly
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mostly
, and I believe you know me well than
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any other
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of utmost
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important
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 to me. If you remember my academic project was of GSM-GPS positioning for public transport systems and you have given special appreciation to me, so I request you to include
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 information in the
recomendation
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recommendation
 letter. Hope you would positively respond and
recomend
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recommend
 me for
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 position. Yours sincerely, Phaneendra Sai
Submitted by Phaneendra on

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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