One of your friends lives in another country.you want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. Describe why you want to work in that country. Tell him about your skills and experience. As some other questions related to work.

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Dear Sara, I hope

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letter will find u in good health. I am writing

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letter because I want to inform you about my arrival the next week and

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to remind you about my job in London. I got a visit visa

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month and I am glad to experience the working style of a dentist in England. I will spend 2 months and will explore different private clinics with your assistance as fortunately, you belong to the same profession. As you know I have been working in Pakistan for 5 years and I can manage patients with dental problems very technically and easily. I was wondering if the attendants are allowed with the patients or not ,especially if the patient is old or a kid as

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is the main issue in our country. I will meet you soon and pay my regards to everyone at home. Your loving friend, Sana Ghani.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

155 words

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ome people think that the study of history is of little use . Others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays people are watching the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels. To what extend do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?