You work at home and have a problem with a piece of quipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that the product which I bought from your shop is not working properly.

Firstly

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, I am an IT professional, and

due to

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the pandemic my office work scenario changed at home for long hours,

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However

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to avoid battery failure, I bought a power bank and mentioned that 30000mph will

last

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more than five hours. But from the second day itself, the product has been showing poor backup.

Moreover

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due to

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my hectic work schedule, I could not spend more time charging my laptop. Because of ,

this

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I decided to buy a power bank. It would affect the submission of completed work on time,

thus

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leading to getting a bad impact on my career. As you offered one year warranty on

this

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product, I would like to get a replacement. I can provide the bill and warranty card at your office. I would be grateful if you consider my concern and find a solution at

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earliest of your convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Asha Vijayan

Submitted by ashakiranbhavsar on Fri Jan 27 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

178 words

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