Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

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are suffering in

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part of their life and the uncomfortable environmental conditions of prisons. Many people believe that a consistent number of

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have been subjected to violent and brutal treatment during the first ages of life.

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to react to the basic and primordial instinct to execute cruel actions.

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, prison should be a place where

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have to compensate for what they have done previously in life.

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on society include higher numbers of

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and loss of serenity among the citizens. First of all, somehow, violence calls brutality and

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results in more

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committed by the same person.

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of loads of

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is a represent a serious

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that has a negative impact on society. It’s mainly caused by suffering lived by

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during their youth and results in

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and loss of serenity among the citizens.