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Dear Sir or Madam,

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is Kate Jin and I have been living in Galesburg for over 10 years. I really like the infrastructure of the city and have been enjoying my time here.

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I noticed there are more people walking their

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without leashes and it has created issues in the town. Even though I love

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, I know of people who are scared of them

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unpleasant experiences when they were young.

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, similar shadows may leave a scar

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children here if

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chase or bark at them.

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are mostly friendly to humans, sometimes they could be very harsh to other

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. The other day I saw an unleashed

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attacking my neighbour's

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. My neighbour had to pick up his

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to prevent a disaster from happening. I really hope you as the major and head of the municipal government, can facilitate

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writing leashing the

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into the law of the town and put up reminder signs. Thank you for your consideration. Best regards, Katherine

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

176 words

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