You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

Dear Sir or Madam, I recently read one of the articles from your newspaper "Daily Times". The article was exploring
town
centres across our country. The article was an interesting read and it was quite detailed in some areas.
For example
, it went into great detail in explaining
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ancient history and how the designs of the centres were conceived. But I beg to differ in the opinion which claimed that all cities looked the same. Please let me elaborate on my position- Each
town
across our country had its own unique characteristics and each
town
has evolved with slightly different kinds of traditions than others.
For example
, the
town
of Winston, where I live, enjoys the festival of Felom, which is organised to worship the god of water and the same is
also
reflected in the emblem situated at the
town
square. Since our
town
went through several seasons of droughts in past
hence
the wall scriptures capture the difficulties faced by its people and remind people to be grateful that
such
horrible calamities have not occurred since
then
.
Although
these are just a few examples, I believe each
town
has its own uniqueness which they showcase through the architecture of the
town
centres. I hope you welcome
this
criticism constructively. And
last
, I would like to invite you to my
town
where I can give you a guided tour and explain the history of our
town
. Regards,
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