IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The chart displays the average sum of foreign
students
Use synonyms
, which study abroad in the
USA
Use synonyms
,
UK
Use synonyms
,
Australia
Use synonyms
 and
Canada
Use synonyms
,
while
Linking Words
, the table illustrates their proportion in two different years.
Overall
Linking Words
, the first three countries, the
USA
Use synonyms
, the
UK
Use synonyms
 and
Australia
Use synonyms
 have a higher increment in their
number
Use synonyms
 of foreign
students
Use synonyms
 than
Canada
Use synonyms
. In comparison, the
number
Use synonyms
 of foreign
students
Use synonyms
 in 2012 is significantly higher than in 2004.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the proportion of people who studied abroad in the
last
Linking Words
 three countries has increased noticeably, meanwhile, in the
USA
Use synonyms
, it remained constant. Looking
initially
Linking Words
 at the bar graph, the highest
number
Use synonyms
 of foreign
students
Use synonyms
 is in the
USA
Use synonyms
, which grew approximately 70000 from 170000 in 2004 to 240000 in 2012. In the next two countries, people who studied abroad in
UK
Use synonyms
 and
Australia
Use synonyms
 were around 120000 in 2004 and rose to nearly under 20000 in 2012. Ultimately,
Canada
Use synonyms
 is ranked as the lowest country with foreign
students
Use synonyms
, and the
number
Use synonyms
 didn’t change meaningfully in 8 years, from 35000 in 2004 to over 55000 in 2012. Regarding the remaining table, in
Australia
Use synonyms
 the percentage of overseas
students
Use synonyms
 has increased substantially with 5% in eight years, from 19% in 2004 to 24% in 2012,
therefore
Linking Words
 it represents the highest country of overseas
students
Use synonyms
 resembling the
USA
Use synonyms
,
UK
Use synonyms
 and
Canada
Use synonyms
. The figures for the
UK
Use synonyms
 and
Canada
Use synonyms
 went up slightly from 9% and 5% in 2004 to 13% and 7% in 2012 respectively.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words students, usa, uk, australia, canada, number with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: