International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more countries are now opening their doors to foreign visitors. Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Because of technology and the increasing peaceful relation among the world

countries

, international

travel

is becoming cheaper and easier for people to do.

However

, some people have

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opinion

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regarding

this

trend, whether it’s more beneficial or not. In general, I believe that

this

trend could bring many positive

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. The reasons,

along with

the differing opinion from the other view would be explained in

this

essay. The first view is that

this

trend

have

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more disadvantages

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than the opposite.

One

might be the enormous amount of pollution from

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long distance

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travel

.

For example

, air

travel

is

one

of the biggest

polluter

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compared to

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means of transportation.

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especially as the world is going through a global environmental crisis. Another reason might be that visitors, especially

tourist

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tourists

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might disrupt the life of

local

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the local

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community.

This

happened in some

area

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like Bali where some

tourist

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tourists

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don’t

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care about the local law and culture,

thus

creating

nuissance

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nuisance

to the local people.

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is enough reason for a country like Great Britain to exclude

themself

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from the European Union that grant entry without

visa

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among its member

countries

. The other view is of course, that international

travel

is more beneficial than not.

One

thing to know

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is that international

travel

has happened since the dawn of human history. Some

of

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the

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example

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are the chronicles of Ibn Battuta

or

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Marco Polo in the past

that

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illustrate what it

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was like

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like

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to visit foreign lands. Not only them,

there are

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but there are also

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many scholars,

mechants

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merchants

, tradesmen,

even

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and even

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soldiers that

travel

the globe and were exchanging information, goods, and services. Through

this

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visits, both the visitor and the

countries

they visit could both get many benefits. So, international

travel

might have some downsides to them like

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pollution or the disruption of

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population. At the same time, the upsides are so much more apparent. All the

countries

that ever prosper

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this

one

thing in common, which is being the transit or a hub for

travel

. In conclusion, international

travel

’s advantages outweigh the disadvantages.