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International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more countries are now opening their doors to foreign visitors. Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Because of technology and the increasing peaceful relation among the world
countries
, international
travel
 is becoming cheaper and easier for people to do.
However
, some people have
different
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opinion
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 regarding
this
 trend, whether it’s more beneficial or not. In general, I believe that
this
 trend could bring many positive
outcome
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. The reasons,
along with
 the differing opinion from the other view would be explained in
this
 essay. The first view is that
this
 trend
have
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 more disadvantages
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than the opposite.
One
 might be the enormous amount of pollution from
the
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long distance
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travel
.
For example
, air
travel
 is
one
 of the biggest
polluter
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 compared to
another
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 means of transportation.
This
bad
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 especially as the world is going through a global environmental crisis. Another reason might be that visitors, especially
tourist
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 might disrupt the life of
local
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the local
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 community.
This
 happened in some
area
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areas
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 like Bali where some
tourist
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don’t
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 care about the local law and culture,
thus
 creating
nuissance
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nuisance
 to the local people.
This
 is enough reason for a country like Great Britain to exclude
themself
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 from the European Union that grant entry without
visa
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 among its member
countries
. The other view is of course, that international
travel
 is more beneficial than not.
One
 thing to know
,
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 is that international
travel
 has happened since the dawn of human history. Some
of
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the
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example
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 are the chronicles of Ibn Battuta
or
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and
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 Marco Polo in the past
that
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 illustrate what it
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was like
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like
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 to visit foreign lands. Not only them,
there are
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but there are also
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 many scholars,
mechants
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merchants
, tradesmen,
even
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 soldiers that
travel
 the globe and were exchanging information, goods, and services. Through
this
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 visits, both the visitor and the
countries
 they visit could both get many benefits. So, international
travel
 might have some downsides to them like
the
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pollution or the disruption of
local
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 population. At the same time, the upsides are so much more apparent. All the
countries
 that ever prosper
has
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this
one
 thing in common, which is being the transit or a hub for
travel
. In conclusion, international
travel
’s advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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