In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Recent years have witnessed an increase in

crime

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rate

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around the world.

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essay will outline some possible important causes of

crime

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suggesting

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some ways to cope with these. One main cause can be

lack

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of

education

and job skills. Despite the advancements in

education

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system in many societies, it seems that more and more

people

living in deprived areas or societies with poor

economy

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encounter poor educational infrastructure.

As a result

, most of them find it difficult to educate or learn professional skills.

This

limited

education

may increase the likelihood of unemployment, resulting in feelings of hopelessness which can contribute to turning to

crime

.

Furthermore

, mental health issues that have not been treated can be another cause

to

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criminal

behaviors

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. Most offenders, particularly those who commit

violence

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crimes, suffer from different types of underlying psychotic disorders, so they may have a tendency to offending activities. A possible way to deal with

this

is

international

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aid to provide educational opportunities.

For example

, through donating money to international charity organizations by both citizens and governments, these organizations can allocate scholarships to

people

from deprived areas, so they benefit from

high-qualified

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education

system

as well as

job

trainings

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training

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. After coming back to their society, they can teach their knowledge and skills to local

people

not only to improve educational infrastructure

,

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but

also

to create better job opportunities, resulting in enhancing positive feelings and satisfaction.

In addition

to that, both governments and experts can take some measures to decrease the criminal consequences of mental illnesses. They both together are able to increase mental health campaigns to raise public awareness about personality disorders and treatments’ ways

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providing

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people

with a safe atmosphere to encourage them to talk about their personality traits, so they can go for

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treatment. In conclusion, there are some causes of committing

crime

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such

as

education

deficit and untreated underlying mental diseases.

Also

, some ways

such

as international educational

aids

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aid

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and increasing mental health awareness campaigns would be warranted to deal with these causes.