Improvementa in health, 3ducation and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Topic Vocabulary:

essential
development
poorer nations
governments
richer nations
responsibility
improvement
healthcare
education
trade
cooperation
mutual benefits
financial aid
technical expertise
resources
global stability
reduce inequalities
international organizations
NGOs
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