You are going to another country to study. you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying , so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. write a letter to this friend. give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you to find a job

#country #study #job #friend #lives #help #plans #part #time

Dear Elma, Hope you are doing well. It is my pleasure to inform you that I got admission to a master's in Artificial Intelligence at the University of Toronto. As you know , studying abroad is my keen interest since my childhood.The classes will commence in September and there will be 12 hours of lectures a week.Apart from the classes,I am allowed to work for 20 hours a week.I am actively looking for a part-time job to meet my monthly expenditures.I possess exposure to antenna design

as well as

signal processing.Since you are working in customer support,I expect your help in finding a job in that field.

Additionally

, my language skills are excellent ,and

hence

I can be part of the support team until I get a job which matches my requirements.

Furthermore

,it will be well appreciated if you arrange an interview so that I can prove my abilities. I am looking forward to hearing a positive reply from you. Hope we can meet in a month. Best Regards, Bushra

Submitted by Alma Islam on Sat Jan 28 2023

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