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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your company. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/ her Explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #company #sort #work
Dear Susan, I am glad to hear that you are doing well. I received your letter a week ago and I was in search to get a suitable job for you in my country. At
last
, I found a job that will match your profile. It's in a reputed multi-national company called WIPRO and the data analysing and checking department has a plethora of vacancies
also
. As you pursue your masters in software engineering, I am sure that
this
 post will absolutely be fine for you. Your experience in the field of data testing will be an advantage for
this
 post.
Therefore
, you should have to apply for
this
 position. You can apply directly to the company mail address
that is
 [email protected] and should attach an updated resume with a passport-size photo and a scanned copy of your passport. Convey my regards to your family. Hope to see you soon and don't forget to contact me when you reach my place. Yours lovingly, Asha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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