You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in the hospital, telling him about the match
Dear Amber,
I hope you are in the pink of your health.
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has been too long Unnecessary verb
It
to
meet you. I am writing Correct word choice
since to
this
letter to inform you that I am moving to your country and I need some help from you regarding finding a job
.
As you know I had finished my graduation in management. now I will come to Canada for my post-graduation. I have taken admission
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admitted
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to in
in
MBA in Brampton University. During the time of my study, I really want to do some part-time work because It is quite hard to survive in a foreign country without money. Correct your spelling
an
Apart from
this
, I would like to do a job
to cover my daily requirement. Such
as Rent of accommodation fee charges, food and So on. You also
know about my financial background. So I do not put any extra burden on my family. Overall
, I think I am enough mature to take care of my expenses Change preposition
on by
by
own.
I send my Correct your spelling
my
C.V
to you in your g-mail account. I request you please find a part-time Correct your spelling
CV
job
for me which suits my resume. If possible then
make a list of the various job
so that when I come there I don’t need to waste my time searching vacancies
.
Thank you in advance and we do fun together when I will with you.
with love,
Manpreet.Change preposition
for vacancies
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