For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

It is undeniable that

art

is a vital aspect

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human beings. Everywhere we go and everything we see, we can spot all things created by someone’s ideas and creativity. Sadly now, there are only a few

people

who think and realize that

art

is as valuable as

science

, technology, and business. The main reasons and possible solutions will be discussed in the following paragraphs. To commence,

people

are mostly aware of how rapidly our technology and digital transformation are shifting now.

Therefore

, they have tended to see

science

as a prestigious field that they need to master in the

last

40 or 50 years.

Additionally

, they seem to forget the fact that aspect

also

plays a pivotal role in all of the high-tech innovations which they are using most of the time,

such

as mobile phones, video games, and so on. By having that view, it is obvious why they do not consider

art

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the way it is.

Besides

this

cause happening to

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art

, the stigma that pursuing

art

does not help

people

make enough money for a living is quite common in society. If you come across a job portal website, you will quickly find out that

science

and engineering jobs, like software developer, business analyst, and full stack engineer have way higher salaries compared to

art

and social sciences jobs,

such

as videographer, content writer, and even illustrator. From that, we can fully understand that many

people

do not have any interest in

art

as a career, and the stigma is not merely an assumption. To tackle

this

issue, some efforts are necessitated or required. I believe we can fix these kinds of prejudice (lack of attention, devoid of enthusiasm, and vulnerable income) toward

art

by appreciating it more,

such

as giving platforms for artists to explore their creativity, supporting them, and not undervaluing them. By giving them a safe place to create, they will be more appreciated.

As a result

, a lot of

people

will consider

art

as an interesting and promising field. Not only that, as we

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will become a parent, we can encourage our future children to pursue

art

as a career

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just a hobby. By having

this

mindset, we can make

art

as

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a valuable aspect of our life again, possibly leading to or paving the way

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how to attract the attention of societies,

such

as young learners, adolescents, youngsters, middle-aged

people

and even senior citizens. In summary, what have discussed above,

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that it is considered just like

science

and technology that

art

is a pivotal part and

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a very impactful effects

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to

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our everyday life.

Thus

, we, as

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human

creature

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, need to value it as we cannot even live without it,

therefore

, let us be more appreciative towards

art

from now on.