For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
It is undeniable that
art
is a vital aspect for
human beings. Everywhere we go and everything we see, we can spot all things created by someone’s ideas and creativity. Sadly now, there are only a few Change preposition
of
people
who think and realize that art
is as valuable as science
, technology, and business. The main reasons and possible solutions will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To commence, people
are mostly aware of how rapidly our technology and digital transformation are shifting now. Therefore
, they have tended to see science
as a prestigious field that they need to master in the last
40 or 50 years. Additionally
, they seem to forget the fact that aspect also
plays a pivotal role in all of the high-tech innovations which they are using most of the time, such
as mobile phones, video games, and so on. By having that view, it is obvious why they do not consider art
as
the way it is. Change preposition
apply
Besides
this
cause happening to the
Correct article usage
apply
art
, the stigma that pursuing art
does not help people
make enough money for a living is quite common in society. If you come across a job portal website, you will quickly find out that science
and engineering jobs, like software developer, business analyst, and full stack engineer have way higher salaries compared to art
and social sciences jobs, such
as videographer, content writer, and even illustrator. From that, we can fully understand that many people
do not have any interest in art
as a career, and the stigma is not merely an assumption.
To tackle this
issue, some efforts are necessitated or required. I believe we can fix these kinds of prejudice (lack of attention, devoid of enthusiasm, and vulnerable income) toward art
by appreciating it more, such
as giving platforms for artists to explore their creativity, supporting them, and not undervaluing them. By giving them a safe place to create, they will be more appreciated. As a result
, a lot of people
will consider art
as an interesting and promising field. Not only that, as we later on
will become a parent, we can encourage our future children to pursue Add the comma(s)
, later on,
art
as a career not
just a hobby. By having Add the comma(s)
,not
this
mindset, we can make art
as
a valuable aspect of our life again, possibly leading to or paving the way Change preposition
apply
on
how to attract the attention of societies, Change preposition
apply
such
as young learners, adolescents, youngsters, middle-aged people
and even senior citizens.
In summary, what have discussed above, it
has Correct pronoun usage
apply
showed
that it is considered just like Change the verb form
shown
science
and technology that art
is a pivotal part and give
Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
a very impactful effects
Correct the article-noun agreement
a very impactful effect
very impactful effects
to
our everyday life. Change preposition
on
Thus
, we, as a
human Correct article usage
apply
creature
, need to value it as we cannot even live without it, Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
therefore
, let us be more appreciative towards art
from now on.Submitted by hpanduhimawan on
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