Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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huge bunch of people who suffer from health issues are

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the utilisation

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of alternative medicines and traditional treatments

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sharply

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. As far as I'm concerned,

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development can be positive in some aspects and negative

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others, the

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which will be discussed in

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paragraphs.

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development is a negative process because

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any chemical

drugs

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has

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some

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terrible effects on

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humans

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is irrecoverable. Man can die if use

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wrong drug,

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is a fact that everybody accepted

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my grandmother has a stroke just because of

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old

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and herbal medicines.

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everybody must make a true decision and not give themselves to die.

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the other hand,

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in attracting Society members to real doctors. if

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of people see the effects and harms

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self

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, they will not do that again.

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is unavoidable to stop using drugs

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painkillers. sometimes home cures by traditional ways are a remedy for

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uncureness

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health problems and disease. by the way of

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my aunt had cancer and

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medical community was lose their faith

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her. Regardless of what happened, she is fresh now and started a new life after that hard period.

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and using medicines without

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doctors

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permit

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increasingly popular among Nations and

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is an unavoidable process which is beginning before.

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discussed, like any other Society

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,

this

issue has not a certain answer to give.