Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots
Some individuals consider that eventually all
works
will be done by Fix the agreement mistake
work
artificial
intelligent Change the adjective
artificially
robots
. So in my opinion
it is bad for factories Add the comma(s)
, in my opinion,
as well as
for population
too.
On the one hand, using Correct article usage
the population
robots
instead
of man labors
is bad for the factory because there will be problems like lack of electricity and Fix the agreement mistake
labor
robots
can be damaged and that time the factor can be stopped may be
for 3 days and it is big problem for the factories. A clear vision is thatCorrect your spelling
maybe
,
recently from the TV program I have seen that one of the important Remove the comma
apply
factory
Change to a plural noun
factories
of
the world which is produced Change preposition
in
microchip
has Fix the agreement mistake
microchips
Add an article
a problem
problem
with their Fix the agreement mistake
problems
robots
and for
this
reason
their factory stopped for 13 days. Add a comma
,reason
At
Change preposition
As
the
consequence of Correct article usage
a
that
they went bankrupt Add a comma
,that
the
value which s consist Correct article usage
a
from
784 014$ because they can not provide their customers with their Change preposition
of
product
. That is
why mans
Change to a genitive case
man's
labor
is Change the spelling
labour
valuably
for everybody.
Change the word
valuable
On the other hand
, replacing humans
Fix the agreement mistake
human
labor
Change the spelling
labour
on
Change preposition
with
robots
is bad especially now, that unemployment increasing day by day. A lot of people unable to feed their family
because they Fix the agreement mistake
families
are have
difficulties Change the verb form
are having
for
finding Change preposition
apply
job
. Add an article
a job
However
using Add a comma
,However
humans
Change the noun form
human
labor
is good for the quality of the Change the spelling
labour
product
because their mind
Fix the agreement mistake
minds
better
than Add a missing verb
are better
robots
and they are able to recognize a small problem on
the Change preposition
with
product
which is unclear for
the Change preposition
to
robots
. For example
, from the magazine called «Time
» we can see that rate of the quality Add a comma
,Time
product
higher where used individuals labor
than Change the spelling
labour
robots
. Exactly from the statistics we can know that 3 products from the 100 produced with some problems where
used Correct your spelling
were
humans
Change the noun form
human
labor
, when it comes to Change the spelling
labour
robots
their rate more than 3 times but there faster than human
.
Taking everything into consideration, I think that people should use both Fix the agreement mistake
humans
humans
and robots
Change the noun form
robot
labor
because both of them has own advantages for the property of factories.Change the spelling
labour
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