Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots

Some individuals consider that eventually all
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intelligent
robots
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it is bad for factories
as well as
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too. On the one hand, using
robots
instead
of man
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is bad for the factory because there will be problems like lack of electricity and
robots
can be damaged and that time the factor can be stopped
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for 3 days and it is big problem for the factories. A clear vision is that
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recently from the TV program I have seen that one of the important
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the world which is produced
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with their
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their factory stopped for 13 days.
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they went bankrupt
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784 014$ because they can not provide their customers with their
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is
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for everybody.
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robots
is bad especially now, that unemployment increasing day by day. A lot of people unable to feed their
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difficulties
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finding
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.
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using
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labor
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is good for the quality of the
product
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than
robots
and they are able to recognize a small problem
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the
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the
robots
.
For example
, from the magazine called «
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» we can see that rate of the quality
product
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than
robots
. Exactly from the statistics we can know that 3 products from the 100 produced with some problems
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labor
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, when it comes to
robots
their rate more than 3 times but there faster than
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. Taking everything into consideration, I think that people should use both
humans
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labor
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because both of them has own advantages for the property of factories.
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