The line graph below shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the thousands of students
admitted at De Salle University
from five different countries, India, Vietnam, Nepal, Indonesia and Colombia, between 1980 and 2020. The number of students
enrolled at De Salle University
increased significantly from all the
five countries over the four decades.
There is a continuous increase Correct article usage
apply
of
student admission at the Change preposition
in
university
. The most significant increase was from India, the number of students
increased from 500 to 15000 in the year
1980 and 2020 respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Also
, there was big
difference Add an article
a big
of
Change preposition
in
students
registered at the university
over one decade, that is
between 2010 and 2020, at
Vietnam and Nepal.
Colombia registered the least amount of Change preposition
in
students
throughout the years, registering none in the year 1980 and about 1500 students
in 2020. Similarly
, the enrolment of Indonesia
Correct your spelling
Indonesian
students
at the University
shows minimal
difference over the decades with lower admission, Add an article
the minimal
this
ranges between 800 students
and 7800 students
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