You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an interview has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: - state your reason for writing - briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibility to cancel it - propose a convenient time for an interview

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Hello Ross, My name is

Patick

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Patrick

and I am an alumna of Bluegill

Univeristy

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University

(class 2015). I am

volunteer

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at our program "prospective student Bluegill University". I would like to invite you

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for

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short

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a short

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informal interview

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our campus,

office

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the office

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is locate

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just behind the main entrance. If you have any problem

to find

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finding

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it, just text me or write

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number phone: 000-096-000, If you have any additional questions you can

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contact me. As I said before the

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interview

inverview

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interview

is informal, talk with me is relax so don't stress is not

nesesery

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necessary

. You can tell me something about yourself, and I can answer any questions you have about our university.

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this

week I am very busy, but

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apply

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the next week I have two days off work - Monday and Tuesday (25 and 26), I propose Monday at 9am. The

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interview

is not obligate, so if you

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want to come just tell me. If you require any

futher

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further

information, feel free to contact me. Best regards, Patrick

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