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The best way to help underachieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in school and their grades will improve. To what extent do you agree?

#pupils #school #activities #grades
The best way to help underachieving
pupils
 is to have compulsory
after
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school
 activities which they must attend.
This
 is because they will become more involved in
school
 and their grades will improve.In my opinion, it has cons and
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.
This
 is because we cannot make them
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 if they have
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interests
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this
. It is argued that
,
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 nowadays
pupils
 are becoming laziness
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school
 subjects because of no manual labour, idler or no
interests
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.
Furthermore
, students are becoming underachieving
due to
 uneducated teachers. And
also
, it can
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cause
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memories. When it comes to unskilled
pupils
, the best option is
arouse
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interests
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on
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 them.
For example
, put them
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 English courses or
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what
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 they want without obligatory. The
after
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school
 extra classes will assist in social interaction.
Moreover
,
this
 method can
also
 be a stress-buster among students.
In addition
,
this
 is
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 to improve
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 to be well-educated and
skillful
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.
As a result
, it can help to be innovative minds which contribute to
get
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 better marks and
to
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future jobs. In conclusion, the best way is
regularly
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 practice for
pupils
.
As well as
 boosts the studies with persevere
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concepts
 without compulsory.
This
 is because it cannot assist underachieving
pupils
 to study hard and explore their
interests
. In my point of view, they should attend
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different courses as much as possible after
school
.
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