You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. But there is a major problem with the accommodation.

Dear Sir, I am Mehwish Peter, a temporary student, enrolled in the “I.T Management” course staying at Royal's dormitory,
Room
no 27. I am writing
this
letter to make a complaint about the inconvenience that I am currently experiencing
due to
the accommodation. At the time of filling application for the accommodation, I specifically selected a single
room
of 20 meters square with an attached bathroom, preferably close to the University.
However
, I have been allotted a shared
room
without a connected bathroom.
Moreover
, the location is 3 KM far from my main campus, and it takes almost an hour to reach there. On top of it, the ventilation system of the
room
is dreadful, and sunlight hardly gets into my
room
.
Therefore
, I would like you to change my place to the asked specifications. The
room
must equip with a reliable ventilation system and must have adequate space with a connected restroom. I am looking forward to hearing from you on
this
matter. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Peter Parker
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